Comments for On Top of the World

Comment on Disturbance 0.3 by karen

karen — Sun, 16 Nov 2008 15:42:48 +0000

My heart went out for jane. Their life seems to be very desperate. But anne is cute! Kiril really had to mind his temper.

Mohohon: haha your comments always motivate me to write faster! this just started off as an experiment, and it started to brew a story in my head. i actually don’t know where i’m taking as of the moment haha but i’m sure inspiration will hit!

Comment on Disturbance 0.2 by karen

karen — Thu, 13 Nov 2008 17:15:47 +0000

She had my pity. I like Anna alot, i sense she might be more than just android in the future

Comment on Disturbance by karen

karen — Thu, 13 Nov 2008 17:05:30 +0000

A new story!! Can’t wait to read more!

Comment on Chapter 4 by Mel

Mel — Tue, 05 Aug 2008 08:35:27 +0000

Just curious, but, why the name “Melissie”?
Mohohon: I originally wanted her to be called Melissa but then my 3-year old cousin managed to butcher it into Melissie cuz he couldn’t pronounce it right, so it kind of grew on me like a fungus and it became Melissie =)

Comment on Chapter 15 by karen

karen — Mon, 30 Jun 2008 23:35:55 +0000

she really gone nuts! At first i thought she was having those pregnancy depression and get paranoid. Now she wants to keep april away?Who is this Renee anyway?
Mohohon: haha sorry, i’ll have to keep you hanging till I come back from vacation =D

Comment on Chapter 14 by karen

karen — Mon, 30 Jun 2008 15:00:40 +0000

I havee the feeling that she doesn’t love Bryce at all, in fact she seem to hate that little guy alot. She should hate lex instead of the carbon copy of him.

Mohohon: Yes, I’ve been explicitly exposing that for a purpose of course which will be explained.. . soon =)

Comment on Chapter 13 by karen

karen — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 12:31:46 +0000

I think they should get a divorce or something. Poor baby Bryce,he will grow up with lots of issues unsolve as well. Lex, is becoming an unfaithful husband huh?

Comment on Chapter 12 by karen

karen — Wed, 28 May 2008 04:58:15 +0000

Ahh, the nasty ‘i hate my sister’ phase. She must thought her mom love Christine better. Poor girl. April you are so mean to your younger daughter! she didn’t buy anything for the younger one did she?

Mohohon: April did buy something for Melissie but she didn’t personally give Melissie a makeover or anything (hence she does it herself) but yes, three females in a house. Let the cat fights break out! XD

Comment on Chapter 11 by karen

karen — Thu, 15 May 2008 08:06:18 +0000

Poor thing, she is so young but had to take up the mother’s job. April should really buckle up in her relationship with her daughters, before both of them treat her like a stranger. Sometimes, these game glitches really weird and freak me up, in my neighborhood a maid kept popping up at various weird time like midnight or something and kept pestering one of my sim which is not single….

Mohohon: A maid? Haven’t had that yet but was the maid having an affair? =p

Comment on Chapter 10 by karen

karen — Mon, 05 May 2008 05:31:27 +0000

I have this sinking feeling that their marriage wouldn’t last. Lex is annoying at the sense that he seem don’t want to care about his wife and the baby. Love your story.

Mohohon: Oh, Devonny’s too stubborn to let go of the marriage that easily! Lex might seem slightly shady compared to everyone else being a saint but there are underlying factors. . .